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the courtyard keeps the fallen bougainvillea- sunset on a mauve sea This haiku was chosen for first place. One can image a courtyard perhaps where two lovers just parted, somewhere maybe in the heart of Spain or wherever your own imagination transports you. The very image of a courtyard not only brings flowers to mind, but secrets too, and this author's use of the word "keeps" befits this concept so well. The use of the word "fallen" to describe the blossom is also dynamic, and its real meaning remains hidden deep in this haiku. Sara's use of the words "mauve sea" bring the purple in the flower and in the sunset to new heights. Very nice work---an'ya, editor |
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| nakaniwa ni bugenbiria no ochishimama fujiironi umi yubaetewori the courtyard keeps the fallen bougainvillea- sunset on a mauve sea |
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| haiku: Sara Winteridge haiga: Mary Rodning Translation: Hiromi Inoue Calligraphy: Shisen Flute Music: Choshi Sara's Biography Second Place Winner Table of Contents |
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